Question:
Can anyone help me make a poem about how in the past we were close but now we're fading away each day and like how i want it to go back how it use to be?
I know how to make it but I wanna make it perfect. And I don't know how I should start it. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
Answer:
Think of a good title. Then, base all of your ideas and organize them.
Nothing's perfect, but you can call the title perfect or something.
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I don`t really think it`d be meaningful at all
if it wasn`t one of your own works. No one knows it better than you do.
Start brainstorming, and make a rough draft.. ? =T Then slowly work
your way up to the final piece.
If your feelings and thoughts are all jumbled up, spill them all on paper,
and just rephrase/reword them so they make sense.
Don`t worry about it having to be perfect. Just so long as you expressed
your feelings down onto your paper, i`m sure it`ll be heartfelt.
What you think is your best, most likely is already perfect.
Gee.. good luck =X
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try finding a poetry book for inspiration but dont copy them out.
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I always write poems. It makes me feel better.
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I write poems too, it's pretty easy half the time,
because you're expressing how you feel into that poem.
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it doesn't matter how cliche the poem is or lame it is.
the point is, you cared enough to make a meaningful poem.
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hi, hows this?
Fading of the pale white paper,
Each letter seemed to have lived so long.
Yet as the sun’s radiant rays vanish
It leaves me in the dark coldness.
I’m still swallowing your last words
Loneliness has already sunken in my skin
Yet letting go is still pain stricken
By your everlasting warmth.
Still yearning for the dreams of yesterday
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roses are red
violets are blue
i suck at writing poems
and so do you
Answer:
hi, hows this?
Fading of the pale white paper,
Each letter seemed to have lived so long.
Yet as the sun’s radiant rays vanish
It leaves me in the dark coldness.
I’m still swallowing your last words
Loneliness has already sunken in my skin
Yet letting go is still pain stricken
By your everlasting warmth.
Still yearning for the dreams of yesterday
Hey hope you don't mind me fixing something. Only fixed one line cause the others were a little bit hard..
Fading of the pale white paper,
Each letter seemed to have lived so long.
Yet as the sun’s radiant rays vanish
It leaves me in the darkness, where I don’t belong,
I’m still swallowing your last words
Loneliness has already sunken in my skin
Yet letting go is still pain stricken
By your everlasting warmth.
Still yearning for the dreams of yesterday
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^ That's a pretty good poem. o____o.
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do you have any ideas for this poem? because if you wrote them down or something and thought hard about it, maybe it will just come to you? that's usually what happens to me.
when i read your description of your relationship, paper came to mind. i don't know if you could understand this, but like..paper is perfect in the beginning. but then, time goes on & it gets old & aged. and you may want it to go back to being perfect. but it just can't happen.
but then, this is like saying your relationship is ending. so nevermind. hahaa :]
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got it from somewhere.. no idea where
somehow brutality of time won't let us be together again
as you could never see me and i could never ease your pain
but as the time passes through these unforgettable scars
i am sure of the time when our love would shine like stars
so allow me to play with your shadow
as your soul couldn't see me anymore
and let my still heart rest on your feets
as only you could make it beat like before
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fine
change it to ' IT LEAVES ME IN THE DARK COLDNESS.'
Xp
